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one of my essay

Three days ago while I checked on my box full with my school stuff, I saw my English essay when I'm in form 5 and I still keeping it. So, I would like to share what I wrote. It might have a lot of grammar error but I try my best. FYI, the story was not based on my real life experience..


      Every time I see Lucas Richard,the incident that occurred to me two years ago would replay in my mind and it seemed as if it happened only yesterday. Lucas Richard is my brother's best friends. He was the most handsome guy in the school. No! Make it the most handsome guy in the universe. I was attracted to him since the first time, my eyes locked into his eyes. His sparkling green eyes always gave an aura of intelligence. His high cheek bones and thick fair black hair always took my breath away. Everytime, his dazzling smile made my heart melt just like a hot knife cutting through butter. Overall he looked like Brad Pitt to me. It did not take a genius to know that I had crush on him.

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